Eyes - Retouch eyes
Eye enhancement is considered a must in professional portraiture and magazines. The eyes should be the dominant part of the image conveying the mood and keeping the interest.
In the second image the obvious round flash lights have been replaced with a more natural looking catch light. The whites whitened and the eyes retouched with a warmer colour. See more on the retouching eyes blog post.
For a complete facial retouch contact visit the photo retoucher.